You had a lot of good work going there. The lower opacity overlay was a nice touch there was only one part that was a little jarring to the eyes but over all it was a nice piece. I loved the fade to black and white at the end. Good job Lauren.
You made a good use of traditions throughout. I also like how at the end, you can just see her silhouette with darkness around her which gives a great sense of hopelessness.
I think you conveyed more of a message through your editing which was very well done. Overlaying opacities and amplified brightness to desaturation worked very well. I know you dont have so much control over the talent but I wish she would've showed more emotion
I liked your edits and effects that you use. the way you layered some shots made me feel Alex's mind was in different places instead of being focused, good job!
The music was very fitting for the emotion! I also like the way you used fading in between shots.
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ReplyDeleteYou had a lot of good work going there. The lower opacity overlay was a nice touch there was only one part that was a little jarring to the eyes but over all it was a nice piece. I loved the fade to black and white at the end. Good job Lauren.
ReplyDeleteYou made a good use of traditions throughout. I also like how at the end, you can just see her silhouette with darkness around her which gives a great sense of hopelessness.
ReplyDeleteI really like the sets and locations that you chose. You also did a really good job placing the actor in the shots and arranging the scene.
ReplyDeleteI liked the music, it went along well in my opinion. Video was good!
ReplyDeleteThe music went really well with the concept of the whole video.
ReplyDeleteI love how you overlapped the video to create a blurry/double effect. I think that went really well with grief.
ReplyDeleteYour video was amazing! I really like the effects and the editing choices!
ReplyDeleteI think you conveyed more of a message through your editing which was very well done. Overlaying opacities and amplified brightness to desaturation worked very well. I know you dont have so much control over the talent but I wish she would've showed more emotion
ReplyDeleteI liked all the effects you used, especially when you could see two of her. Good job portraying the emotion.
ReplyDeleteI liked your edits and effects that you use. the way you layered some shots made me feel Alex's mind was in different places instead of being focused, good job!
ReplyDeleteThe music you picked synced really well with your video.
ReplyDeleteWelp... my comment appears to have disappeared. Great studio space, music score and clever use of color to communicate your emotion. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the infamous feeling of artists' block. The motion effects are nice, showing a lost touch with reality.
ReplyDeleteI think you portrayed your emotion well. The music went well with the theme
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